My Distraction:
Strong, surrounding, busy. That is my oasis. This place is what many may call the heart. It always beats with life and when I'm there, I'm glad to indulge. Whistles, honks, chimes, and chatter, they all add to the ambiance. The lighting reminds me of modern fireflies. I find beauty in creation and that inspires me to create for myself. In this world, my mind is distracted, thoughts carried away. Sometimes you become overwhelmed however, find myself yearning to go back every time I'm away.
I liked your comment about the lighting reminding you of fireflies. It made me think of where I work. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThis is good, but I am aching for more! Give me more details to envision this sacred place, to you. Where is it? What is going on there? I feel like I'm in a city, but is that where you're writing about?
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